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until the day i die
i swear i'll never cry
over a worthless thing like you
who never came on cue
to things like my problems
or my spaces or columns
i wonder why i stuck around
or listened to all your sound
to times where i never broke
or when you had drugs, coke
to some extent i hate you
or maybe your person, ew
sometimes it hurts
when you ignore me, so curt
i want to break down and cry
but i remembered i told myself
until the day i die
©2006-2010 ~physiquex
:iconphysiquex:

Author's Comments

This is an AWESOME poem. I love this poem to death. ^^; It was written, and inspired by 'Until The Day I Die' by Story Of The Year, an awesome band. xD

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:iconmasoquistindecadence:
:omg: :clap:
this is awesome plenty of power
i liked too

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Since I was born I started to decay :shithappens:
:iconbunnis:
aaa!I like it very much!
It reflects the mood of one period of my life

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Naive stupid bunny.
:iconphysiquex:
Heh thankyou. xD I was like. Kinda in that mood when I wrote this poem, but I got over the guy evetually. xD

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We could sit around and cry.. But frankly, you're not worth it anymore.
:iconbr-photography:
:wow: I really like how this flows so well. The rhyming is great too. The main theme of the peom is at the beginning and the end and it is linked in very well :clap: :+favlove:
:iconphysiquex:
^^; Heh I was surprised at how this turned out so well too. I was like.. 'Whoa. This is GOOOOOOD.' and was wondering, 'how did I even write this?' for the entire day. xD

Thanks for the fav! yayyy. xD

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We could sit around and cry.. But frankly, you're not worth it anymore.
:iconbr-photography:
:lol: Yeah I do that too, a lot. It's very good and something to be proud of :) And you're very welcome

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